Why I’m posting I’d love narrative feedback. – Does the story make sense? – Are Ulyses and Marcus believable? – Which directions would you explore next (politics, tech, moral fallout)?
What’s live today • First issue, 25 rough pages. • No paywall; just a PDF.
Next steps Regular releases toward a 8 or 10 issues collection. I’ll revise based on your critiques and wild speculations.
Grateful for any thoughts on pacing, historical plausibility, or character depth.
Thanks for reading!